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Friskchara

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I think that overall, it's a very well done piece of art! The idea itself has been done before (the contrast between Frisk and Chara) but I can't really blame you, I'm guilty of that sometimes too! The shading and coloring are pretty smooth and the colors are nice and not an eyesore. The only problem with the colors I have is that the purple and blue on Frisk's jumper is a tad too bright. Try using slightly darker versions of the colors and you should be good! The idea itself also, with Frisk being the "mercy" and Chara being the "fight" seems a bit close minded to me. Since it's more of the protagonists choice whether to fight or not. Instead, I think a contrast between a merciful Frisk, smiling and with the Mercy button, vs the Frisk with a knife, covered in dust and with the Fight button. Either way, good piece of art, seems very professional and lovely!