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Lemonhope

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SOOOO SAAAAAAAAAD ;A;
SOO SAAAAAAAAD QAQ
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I adore the style. It's simple, it's sweet. The overall message of this drawing is absolutely beautiful. Despite all the good, there is some bad, but only in the transitions and words. The transitions are very choppy. They sort of take away from the beauty of the drawing. The text also does take away. What I mean is that the choice of font is very robotic and computer looking, I would have expected someone to use a pretty, flowing font to portray the message further. Sometimes, the art is enough, but when you're trying to do this sort of thing, you must be very careful not to mess it up with tiny things. I did enjoy the appealing, smooth lines of the drawing and the colors. I ask really enjoyed the message, keep working hard, I look forward to seeing more of this.