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kaiya(c)malengil: hair blue eyes with the Rinnegan, she is cold and direct
hayato(c)malengilrange hair, the son of Naruto and Hinata, calm and likes Kaiya
daichi(c)malengil: blond hair, daughter of deidara
taiyo(c)malengil: brown hair, son of sasori
hatori(c)malengil: black hair son of itachi
minos(c)malengil: red, serious, son of Karin and sasuke

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